September 09, 2012

Storm Maker


Storm Maker
The Dawn of Ireland 1

Erin O’Quinn

Siren-BookStrand, Inc.


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Her eyes threaten a drowning in their green depths. Her mouth warns a maelstrom of passion. He calls her his Storm Maker.

5 comments:

  1. I'm just not too sure about this line. The words don't seem to 'sit' properly for me.

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  2. Wow, I love this line, it's like poetry.
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  3. Well, reading it back now, I can see where "maelstrom of passion" is a little purple. I may have to change this one! "Her mouth invites deep danger." Something like that, to reflect her ability to please him. Thanks, Marybelle and Ingeborg too.

    And Lynn, thanks for this wonderful opportunity to promote my first historical romance. I appreciate you!

    Warm regards to all, Erin

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  4. I love the line Erin, very poetic in my opinion.

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  5. Thank you, Kim! I want people to see the connection between her eyes/mouth and the storm she creates with Liam. The book takes place after she has given her word to St Patrick that she will not do the naughty until she's married...so she has to create a storm in other ways...

    I sure appreciate your opinion. :-D

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